Wednesday, October 9, 2013

"I Ain't Crying"



The thick wall of his lies hugged her pupil,
Blurring the vision of truthfulness.
Colorblind was her innocent eyes,
Saw only his manipulated color.


Cunningly he laid a net of deception,
Naively she fell into the designed trap.
She saw his fabricated rainbow,
Believing it to be real and beautiful.


Finally broken was heavily loaded wall of his lies,
So were her heart, shattering into infinite pieces.
With so many things to bear,
Flooded were her eyes with the liters of tears.


Willingly she let it flow, cleansing the every lie,
Flushing the every silly mistake,
Diluting the faith,
And eroding the trust forever.


As I sat watching her,
Respecting her for fighting this long,
Applauding her for never stooping and stopping.
She turned, smiled and choked “I ain’t crying.”


10 comments:

  1. I thought you were telling your own story...until the law stanza when you mentioned "her" then i thought it is just a piece of wonderful poem..:)

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  2. Wonderful poem Cheki!!! I'm loving it :)

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  3. Nice poem, Tshering. Keep writing.

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  4. Thank you very much to you all, mean a lot to me :)

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  5. You are the wordcraft, you can really bring things alive. Very beautiful poem. And the title is well chosen. Love it so much.

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    1. Thank you Sir :) I am humbled by your words.

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  6. I know how it feels like when we are deceived. Hope, that "she" is not you. Hehe,.... Nice one....expressive.....

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    1. :) That 'she' is she, not me. Thank you for visiting:)

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  7. Beautiful lines..how beautiful will it be , if it's translated into dzongkha song with Minzung lhamo's voice.....hehe

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